Just awesome story.Aap sach me bahut accha likhti hai,readers ko bandh k rakhne wali story,har part ke baad curiosity badhti hai ki aage kya hoga really very interesting story....lekin ye OTP wala system bahut irritating hai har chiz ke liye baar baar OTP maangte hai.baaki story bahut acchi hai,All the very best
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anonymous
19 Apr 2025
Ek toh yaha OTP wala system bht irritating hai Banda cmnt Krna bhi chahe toh bhi das vaar soche.par story itni engaging or intresting thi ki me cmnt krne se khud ko rok hi nhi paayi, starting me laga bht basic sa simple plot hai phr lga plot ke naam ke according kuch toh alag or naya hoga bs yahi soch kar padhna jari rkha,or jaisa ki socha tha vakayi twist or turn ka bht mast tadka laga....Mtlb dil garden garden ho gaya,really superb story,writer.ap sach mai bht bht achha likhte ho,apke dialogue deliver karna bahut hi effective hai,well done ap readers ko bandh k rakhte ho har ek part me curiosity rahti hai ki aage kya hoga,eagerly waiting for the next part...All the very best .
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